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July 2007
In this issue
  • The Art of the Pitch
  • Shock PR Offers "PR in a Box"
  • Shock PR Client News
  • PR Tip
  • Shock PR Contact Information
  • Dear Dick,

    Did you know that one of the best ways to get a journalist's attention in a pitch letter is to start with a "did you know" question? That's just one of the great tips you'll learn from this month's feature story, "The Art of the Pitch." With the intense competition from other PR professionals and company PR reps for each journalist's attention -- not to mention the dwindling editorial space available due to decreased print advertising -- you need to make your story idea stand out from the crowd. If your idea is compelling and also offers value to the audience for which a journalist writes, you have a winning combination.

    Since the summer in the U.S. and Europe is traditionally a bit slower time for both PR pros and journalists alike, it is an ideal time to try to connect with some of your media targets with your story ideas. I hope you enjoy the rest of our newsletter, and your summer.

    Have a great month!


    Christine Shock

    The Art of the Pitch

    Get an editor's attention by writing a stand-out pitch letter

    A pitch letter is one of the most direct and efficient PR tools for getting publicity. The key is to have a great idea, communicate that idea effectively, and make contact with the right editors.

    To pique an editor's interest, you must make a case for your story by showing how your information would be of interest to and/or benefit the audience. Since the press gets bombarded with hundreds of pitches and news releases each day, the more specific, timely, concise, and interesting your story idea is, the better your chances of getting a response.

    Strategic planning and writing are crucial when creating and targeting a pitch letter. Here are several tips that will help you develop a winning pitch the next time you have a solid news or feature story idea related to your expertise, company, products, or services.

    Make the right contacts
    Where do you want your story published or broadcast? While regional and national press have the most overall impact, competition is fierce. It takes a major story to make it to that level; however, precise strategy and persistence will increase your chances of hitting it just right. Meanwhile, consider local press opportunities, trade/industry publications, and niche websites -- as all of these outlets will help you reach potential customers, give you decent visibility, and provide the opportunity for you to hone your media skills and build your press coverage portfolio.

    To help you get started on targeting the appropriate editors, refer to our web site's resource section at: http://www.shockpr.com/html/resources.html. Subscribing to media services can be costly, but worth it for helping you develop press lists and making contact with the appropriate editors. Also, many of the media services will give you data on publications in every trade and profession that exists. A cost-free but time-consuming approach would be to review each publication or news station online and identify the appropriate editor by searching the site or calling the organization.

    Quality is better than quantity
    A great pitch needs to have substance behind it. Make sure the information you're pitching is truly newsworthy or makes for a great feature or human interest story. The pitch has to have merit in order for the editor to keep reading and want to know more about your idea. Better to send out two strong pitches per year than 20 weak ideas. It will be worth it in the long run.

    Think like a journalist
    Editors don't have time to sift through a letter to understand what you're trying to communicate. Get to the point quickly and make a compelling case for why your idea is newsworthy. Discuss how your story idea would be of importance to the audience. How will the audience benefit from the coverage of the story? For example, will the product, service, or new information make their lives easier and/or save them money? Will they be interested in the human interest angle side of the story?

    Keep in mind the press is always on the lookout for new trends and ideas that bring a local perspective to a national story -- especially if you can support your pitch with surveys, statistics, and case studies. (To read more about what a journalist is looking for, read our past newsletter feature, "Boston Globe Correspondent Offers PR Advice" at http://shockpr.com/newsletters/dec05.html).

    Write like a journalist
    The mechanics and content of the letter are a top priority when formulating a successful pitch. The same goes for headlines and subject lines. You may have the greatest pitch but if your subject line is wordy or confusing it may be overlooked or deleted. Think of encapsulating the most important and relevant information about your story and condensing it to ten words or less.

    The letter itself should be no longer than one page. Your lead paragraph should start with the most important "hook" of your story by stating an interesting fact or asking a "did you know" question that entices the editor to want to keep reading.

    Develop your idea by providing the necessary information needed to support the story as well as your background information and/or a link to your web site and/or press kit. Be sure to include when you are available and the best way to be contacted.

    Be a wealth of information
    In your letter or while you are speaking to an editor, provide as much help as possible in developing all angles of the story. For example, in addition to including background statistics or surveys, offer third-party and/or industry resources. Reporters frequently look for multiple sources when writing stories, so providing several credible names with contact information will also help you cultivate relationships with key members of the media. By the same token, let the editor know you are willing to be interviewed for other stories related to your industry and be sure to communicate your different areas of expertise.

    Follow up but don't overdo
    One or two follow-up emails or phone calls are okay, but mostly likely the editor will contact you if he or she is interested. Still, it's okay to initiate a call that goes something like this: "I'm the owner of XYZ Company following up on a story idea I sent you about a new product that will help consumers save time." At that point, be sure to have all the relevant information on hand should the editor want you to elaborate. If you don't hear back after two follow-up calls, the editor is most likely not interested. You can continue to pitch your idea to other news organizations, but remember not to take rejection from the press personally. Some editors receive literally hundreds of story ideas and news releases each day.

    When it comes to the media, timing can be everything, but being selective about your story pitches, staying the course, and building positive relationships are equally important and will pay off over time.

    Shock PR Offers "PR in a Box"

    Readers who would like to brush up on their PR basics might be interested in Shock PR's "PR in a Box" product. PR in a Box is a complete Do-It-Yourself PR kit (in an actual box!) that includes everything from PR document templates, to advice on getting coverage, to PR resources that will help you do your job more effectively. It is perfect for those just starting a PR program, or those who are new to PR.

    Please see our website: http://www.shockpr.com/html/pr_in_a_box.html for more details and ordering information. All orders are usually shipped the same or next day.

    Shock PR Client News

    Shunra Software announced that the company's Shunra VE network simulation solution is a 2007 TMC Labs Innovation Award winner, presented by Internet Telephony magazine. The company also announced a new CFO, Chris Hughes, had joined Shunra. See http://www.shunra.com.

    The Boston Entrepreneur's Network (E-Net) group held their Boston Harbor Boat Cruise this month and had an outstanding turnout. Although the weather started out foggy, by mid-cruise it cleared up and the lights of Boston along the harbor were shining. Regular monthly meetings will resume in September. See www.boston-enet.org.

    PR Tip

    One way to create ideas for pitch letters is to pay close attention to what stories are getting covered and why. Learn to read the news from an editor's point of view and notice what topics and experts are getting great coverage. This will give you ideas when developing your own ideas.

    Shock PR Contact Information

    Our address and phone numbers are: Shock PR, Inc. P.O. Box 3174 Bourne, MA 02532 T: 508-743-9993 F: 508-743-9566

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